I need your help to spread the word! Vote for Mistress Of The Stone for Best First Paragraph and Last Line at RT Reviews.
Sarah Wendell of Smart Bitches weighed in and lent her thoughts to all the excerpts. Huzzah! I managed to keep her interest!
Below is my excerpt. We were asked to turn in the first paragraph and last line of the novel.
FIRST PARAGRAPH:
LuĂsa Tavares had a list of sins the length of the Antilles, but there was no time to repent for them now. She spat out the tang in her throat then shimmied down the mainmast of the Coral, her tight leather britches and sharp cutlass a mockery to all that was decent in a woman. Time was running out for the captain of the Coral. And with it, his luck.
LuĂsa Tavares had a list of sins the length of the Antilles, but there was no time to repent for them now. She spat out the tang in her throat then shimmied down the mainmast of the Coral, her tight leather britches and sharp cutlass a mockery to all that was decent in a woman. Time was running out for the captain of the Coral. And with it, his luck.
LAST LINE:
Mayhap, his chance had come.
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Mayhap, his chance had come.
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So what do you think? Will you vote for me? Will you help me spread the word? Tweet the link to all your followers. I need all the help I can get.
Note: If you noticed me absent this morning, it's because we had a huge thunderstorm roll in. Thick clouds are havoc on satellite connections. But we're back up for now. What a day to lose my internet connection!
I need to go out for a little while but I'll be back this afternoon to visit with everyone and answer emails.
Note: If you noticed me absent this morning, it's because we had a huge thunderstorm roll in. Thick clouds are havoc on satellite connections. But we're back up for now. What a day to lose my internet connection!
I need to go out for a little while but I'll be back this afternoon to visit with everyone and answer emails.



16 comments:
voted!
Love it!! Voted!! :-)
#3 voter here!
Voted earlier this morning and tweeted and posted on blog to send folks over hopefully!
jackie ^_^
I loved it, Maria. I voted and I love Mayhap.
Voted and tweeted. I like Mayhap and I had to look it up so I'm not sick of it at all.
Voted, I hope you win! :)
Thank you, guys! You are the best!!
Special thanks to those of you who tweeted or posted about me on your blog. I was touched by your generosity.
Voted - good luck!
Thank you, Charlie! That's most kind.
I voted. I'll try to get a FB post out on this tomorrow.
Thank you, Linda! That was sweet of you to visit too. I know you've had your hands full lately.
I have about 15 confirmed votes...you have a lot of friends here at WAG and Chicago!!
-Becky
Thank you, Becky! I am putting you in my will. :o)
Just voted and you got good comments from Sarah Wendell, trust me that is a hard thing to do.
Good Luck
Thanks, Joanna!
I know Sarah doesn't pull her punches, so it makes me doubly grateful.
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