Good Editing Matters

My editor mentioned to me that she was very picky. I laughed out loud!

On many of the writing boards that I belong to there is always someone who will pipe up and announce that polishing his/her novel sucks all the passion out of the story. Their battle plan (spoken and/or implied) is to leave the picky stuff to their "future" editor.

I never comment on those posts because that kind of sideways planning signifies that the person isn't ready for publication. You have to get the mechanics perfect--or as perfect as you can get them, or it will never see an editor.

Oh I know what these people are thinking. "My story is so original, riveting, brilliant, yadda yadda, that the editor will want it and fix my bo-bos. Puleeeeeeeese! It doesn't work that way.

You want to get published? Here are the steps.

1. Write a great story.
2. Edit that story until it stops yanking readers out of the story.

I know excellent writers who are still not published. They do everything right, but for some reason they haven't gotten the call yet. What chance do you think a sloppy writer has?

Do the work. If your grammar sucks, take a class. If your story meanders, find some brutal crit partners and leave the cheerleaders at home.

TOUCH OF FIRE never lost its appeal to me, even when I slaved over the details at a sentence by sentence level. It's a great story and I think my love for it showed all the way through.

Grunt work matters.

Comments

Anonymous saidā€¦
You know I'm going to agree with you on this one. I can't imagine letting the little stuff slide. Have some pride!
Maria Zannini saidā€¦
I don't blame anyone for making a mistake. (I make plenty.) But if I make the same mistake over and over again after you or another CP calls me on it, then I deserve the brickbats.

I would be ashamed to turn in something to you guys that isn't polished. I don't expect you to clean up my messes. That's just unfair and inconsiderate of your time.
Diane Craver saidā€¦
Great post but the reason I'm here is because I just read your story about your first Christmas with your husband - I got tears in my eyes. Thanks for posting it on the Samhain blog!

Happy New Year to you!

Blessings,
Diane
Maria Zannini saidā€¦
Thanks, Diane, and welcome. I'm so glad you stopped by. :o)