Style Sheets: The Writer's Punch List
I hadn't planned on discussing style sheets until the end of the month, but Shelley Munro asked about series bibles on her blog recently so I thought I would go ahead and do it early.
Because the worlds I build are so complex, I regularly use style sheets. A style sheet in its simplest definition is a punch list of every unique detail in your story. A series bible is usually the same document but it transcends the style sheet in that it keeps track of the over-arching details like names, phrases, and other world building facts that will appear in book after book.
Both are indispensable. It's especially useful for SF & Fantasy writers when designing aliens, languages or customs.
True Believers had an immense style sheet. Not only did I have to keep track of the Nephilim, Alturians, and humans, but the computer characters as well.
Each aspect of the world building has its own style sheet. Some readers said True Believers had an epic feel to it. That was totally intentional. But I wouldn't have been able to accomplish it without my punch list.
I recorded religious holidays, human politics, language, and cultural habits. There was also a style sheet on time lines that not only kept track of the time of day, but the time of year. Even though I lived and breathed that story, it was too complex to do it without a guide. It saved my bacon plenty of times when I was trying to remember spellings and practices.
I recorded religious holidays, human politics, language, and cultural habits. There was also a style sheet on time lines that not only kept track of the time of day, but the time of year. Even though I lived and breathed that story, it was too complex to do it without a guide. It saved my bacon plenty of times when I was trying to remember spellings and practices.
Readers notice when you screw up. A style sheet helps keep the facts straight as you're telling your story.
Names & slang: Every time I used a proper name or created a new term, it went into the bible. Hint: When you create a character name especially one with a unique spelling, add it to your Word dictionary so Word will correct it if you spell it wrong later on in the story.
Characters: Each of my characters had his own page where I described physical appearance, quirks, what made them angry, and what made them scared. In my new book, "Mistress of the Stone", my heroine uses sea-faring expressions unique to her. I jot them down both under "Slang" and "Characters" so I know these are distinctly hers.
Time: It is so easy to lose track of time. If the hero is making breakfast at the start of the chapter, you have to make sure you don't have him eating dinner by the end of it.
Weather: Atmospheric conditions are common in settings. Like the time line, you want your weather to be consistent. If it's sunny when your heroine looks out the window, it can't suddenly be dark and stormy just so you can match her mood.
Topography: Fantasy authors often deal with vast distances and geography. It doesn't matter where you send your characters, but stay aware of the time in relation to the geography. If your hero crosses a desert in the morning, don't have him land on the other side to a tropical paradise (unless you're talking virtual reality).
Whether you use a style sheet just for your own peace of mind or turn it in to your editor with your manuscript as a supplementary database, it will save you hours of searching for a specific detail and it will keep your story consistent from book to book.
Have you ever used a style sheet or series bible?
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Other stuff: I'll probably be late answering comments today. The county in its infinite wisdom called me in for jury duty. In my whole adult life, I have never been chosen. Greg says it's because I have the look of a hanging juror. But who knows. It's a different county. Maybe they haven't heard of my reputation yet.
If you follow me on Facebook (and why shouldn't you) you saw a picture of the giant snake on the gravel road in front of my house. This was a big guy, far bigger than the one who was climbing up my office window a few weeks earlier.
There are days when I think I'd rather live in the city...
Anybody want to place bets on whether I'll get picked for jury duty?
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Other stuff: I'll probably be late answering comments today. The county in its infinite wisdom called me in for jury duty. In my whole adult life, I have never been chosen. Greg says it's because I have the look of a hanging juror. But who knows. It's a different county. Maybe they haven't heard of my reputation yet.
If you follow me on Facebook (and why shouldn't you) you saw a picture of the giant snake on the gravel road in front of my house. This was a big guy, far bigger than the one who was climbing up my office window a few weeks earlier.
There are days when I think I'd rather live in the city...
Anybody want to place bets on whether I'll get picked for jury duty?
Comments
Wow, I'm rambly today.
Good luck with jury duty...
You hit the nail when you explain how important it is to write it down!! In my first book, I cannot tell how many times I had to go searching through over 200 pages to find some detail I was certain I had assigned - only to forget what it was! It was so frustrating... cured me forever of pantsing. Ha! My poor brain can't keep track of all those details without help.
Incidentally, good luck with jury duty. I've only received a summons when I was nursing - so I got out of it!
As for the snake, yikes.... more of them... I killed the last one out the front as it was deadly. I didn't want it sneaking up when I least expected. Oh, I've got the shivers just thinking about them. lol. :)
Will use this now as a guideline for my writing. Thank you for this. Any such advice on writing is always appreciated :)
I'm behind on FB, so i haven't seen the snake yet. I'll try and catch up tonight.
Also, i've never used a style sheet, though i probably should. I generally have a really good memory, but every once in a while i forget how i spell something. Or, i usually have to make sure i don't say every night is a full moon.
I do keep character sheets including special abilities/gifts (I'm writing paranormal).
You should have taken the snake with you on the jury duty call. See what kind of reaction that got.
I bet you'd be brilliant on a jury. Of course, the other jurors might not appreciate your questions :) Cause I KNOW you'd have questions!
My only regret is that I wish I wrote suspense. Talk about a Peyton Place of story ideas.
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Jennifer: Even if I didn't write SF, I'd probably still use the style sheet. I have a terrible memory.
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Stacy: It was the new and unusual words that forced me to create a style sheet. From then on it was easy to tack on anything I needed to remember for next time.
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Nadja: Never had to lug a baby in. I think they released me because I looked more dangerous than the criminals. LOL.
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Angelina: My desk used to be littered with little post-it notes until I realized I could type everything in a nice, neat file.
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LG: That was me! I started out very simply with the first book. Just names and spellings to make sure they were consistent, and then it just grew. I keep all the info on one document, but some people create folders. Whatever is easier for you.
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Mark: I was buried under little pieces of papers and notes. But now, as I write the story, I keep an extra document file open and list anything that needs to be remembered for later.
I can't believe they didn't pick me again. Maybe I ought to shower next time. ;o)
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Linda: I think there were enough snakes in the courthouse--most of them were wearing suits.
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Raelyn: That court room waiting area was packed! But I enjoyed the people-watching. It was a goldmine of ideas.
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Clarissa: In my youth, I'd probably remember all this stuff on my own, but the logbook keeps me honest. :)
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Just started following your blog and I found this post really useful. I'm a first time writer and plan on using this technique to keep track of things as I write the book I have been putting off for years. Many thanks for the advice!
Cheers,
W.
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Congrats on not being picked for jury duty! It may have been different if you'd left Tank and Iko at home ;)
Snake on FB, have to go check for the photo as not hanging out on FB much these days and I missed it.
We have been "blessed" with Copperheads visiting since the rain. 5 inches in one week so guess they are hunting drier ground.
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Bookmarked?
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Feeling smarter?
Well, give me a moment on that part. :-)
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Wayne: Welcome! Glad you found it useful.
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Jenny: It was funny. The three women next to me were showing off digital pictures of their frou-frou dogs. I would've shown them a picture of Tank and Iko, but I don't like to brag. :grin:
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Jackie: I'm kind of glad they didn't pick me. It's a long drive and it's very hard to find a parking spot. Trust me, the lawyers don't want me on their jury. I'm not as forgiving as the judge. :)
In the past I've used a notebook. I'm about to embark on a new series and I intend to be a lot more organized this time.
Time lines are always something that I manage to muck up. Keeping a record as I go would be a much better idea.
I am 'trying' to be a lot more organized.
For me, the biggest help has been keeping track of new words and the spellings of names.
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Shirley: It works (I started that way) but it's much easier to find what you're looking for in an electronic file. Even if the document gets too big, all I have to do is run a search for that item.
Excel makes me nervous. I'm positive that if I hit the wrong cell, it'll launch nukes. Nobody wants that.
Stylesheets - I wish, really wish I was so organised. I've tried several excel variants but never use them adequately. So far I've been able to lodge most of the information in my head. That's not a boast - more an inadequacy ref more efficient methods. Mind you, it might guard against dementia - one way of allowing my various characters to run riot.
I shall have to create a style sheet of my own.